Your hook is everything. The first 1-2 lines determine if people stop scrolling or skip past your post. Master the hook, and you'll dramatically increase engagement. Here's how to write hooks that grab attention.
What Makes a Great LinkedIn Hook?
A great hook has 3 essential qualities:
- Stops the scroll - Creates pattern interruption in the feed
- Creates curiosity - Makes people want to click "see more"
- Promises value - Signals there's a payoff for reading
📊 The Hook Statistics
- 80% of readers never get past the first 2 lines
- Posts with strong hooks get 3-5x more engagement
- You have ~2 seconds to capture attention
The 10 Proven Hook Formulas
1. The Bold Statement Hook
Start with a controversial or counterintuitive claim that challenges conventional wisdom.
Examples:
- "Networking events are a waste of time."
- "Your resume doesn't matter anymore."
- "Stop posting daily on LinkedIn."
- "I learned more in 3 months than 4 years of college."
When to use: When you have a unique perspective that challenges industry norms.
Warning: Must be backed up with solid reasoning or you'll lose credibility.
2. The Curiosity Gap Hook
Tease interesting information without giving it away immediately.
Examples:
- "I just discovered why 99% of LinkedIn posts fail."
- "This one mistake cost me $50K. Here's what happened..."
- "The best career advice I ever got came from a janitor."
- "I used to ignore this LinkedIn feature. Then I tried it..."
When to use: When you have a story, insight, or lesson to share.
Warning: Don't be clickbaity - always deliver on the promise.
3. The Specific Number Hook
Use precise numbers to signal tangible, actionable content.
Examples:
- "I analyzed 1,247 LinkedIn posts. Here's what worked:"
- "3 years ago, I had 487 followers. Today I have 94K."
- "My last post got 892% more engagement. Here's why:"
- "7 LinkedIn habits that transformed my career in 90 days."
When to use: When you have data, lists, or measurable results.
Pro tip: Specific numbers (487) are more credible than round numbers (500).
4. The Personal Failure Hook
Share vulnerability to create instant connection and relatability.
Examples:
- "I got rejected by 127 companies before landing my dream job."
- "My first LinkedIn post got 3 likes. One was my mom."
- "I just made the biggest mistake of my career."
- "I wasted $15K learning this lesson the hard way."
When to use: When sharing lessons learned from mistakes or setbacks.
Warning: Must lead to a valuable lesson or transformation.
5. The Question Hook
Ask a question that makes people mentally engage before they realize it.
Examples:
- "Want to know the real reason you're not getting interviews?"
- "What if everything you know about networking is wrong?"
- "Why do some LinkedIn creators blow up while others don't?"
- "Ever wonder why your posts don't get engagement?"
When to use: When addressing a common pain point or mystery.
Pro tip: Questions that start with "Why" or "What if" perform best.
6. The Pattern Interrupt Hook
Break the expected pattern with unusual formatting or statements.
Examples:
- "No. Just no."
- "I'm done with hustle culture."
- "Plot twist:"
- "Hot take incoming..."
When to use: When you want to stand out in a sea of similar content.
Warning: Overuse makes it lose impact. Use sparingly.
7. The Transformation Hook
Show a dramatic before/after to signal a compelling journey.
Examples:
- "From unemployed to 6-figure salary in 8 months."
- "500 followers → 50K followers. Here's the strategy:"
- "I went from hating my job to loving Mondays. Here's how:"
- "Zero clients to fully booked in 90 days."
When to use: When you have a genuine transformation story to share.
Warning: Must be authentic - people can smell fake transformation stories.
8. The Direct Address Hook
Speak directly to a specific audience to create instant relevance.
Examples:
- "If you're a founder struggling to hire, read this:"
- "For everyone who thinks they're 'too old' to switch careers:"
- "Dear job seekers who keep getting ghosted..."
- "Calling all marketers who are tired of the same old advice:"
When to use: When you have advice for a specific group.
Pro tip: The more specific your audience callout, the stronger the hook.
9. The Unpopular Opinion Hook
Share a perspective that most people won't publicly admit.
Examples:
- "Unpopular opinion: Most LinkedIn advice is terrible."
- "I'm going to say what nobody else will:"
- "Let's be honest - we're all tired of the same LinkedIn cliches."
- "The truth about work-life balance that no one talks about:"
When to use: When addressing elephant-in-the-room topics.
Warning: Controversial ≠ offensive. Stay professional.
10. The Story Hook
Drop readers into the middle of an interesting moment.
Examples:
- "My manager just called me into his office. I knew I was getting fired."
- "The email said: 'We need to talk about your performance.'"
- "10 minutes before my biggest presentation, the slides disappeared."
- "I opened my inbox to find 347 rejection emails."
When to use: When you have a compelling narrative to share.
Pro tip: Start in the middle of the action, not the beginning.
Hook Writing Best Practices
Length Matters
- Optimal: 6-12 words (fits in preview)
- Maximum: 2 short lines (before "see more")
- Avoid: Starting with pleasantries or context
First Word Power Words
Hooks that start with these words typically perform well:
I / I'm / I've
You / Your
Stop / Don't
Why / How
Nobody / Everyone
Just / Finally
This / That
Here's / Here are
Emoji Usage
Strategic emoji use can enhance hooks:
- ✅ Good: "🚨 This mistake is costing you opportunities."
- ✅ Good: "I just learned something that blew my mind 🤯"
- ❌ Bad: "🎉🚀✨ Check out this amazing tip! 💡🔥✨"
⚠️ Emoji Rule
Use 0-1 emojis in your hook. Any more is distracting. The emoji should add emphasis, not replace words.
The Hook Testing Framework
Here's how to test and improve your hooks systematically:
Step 1: Write 5 Different Hooks
For each post, write 5 different hooks using different formulas above.
Step 2: The Scroll-Stop Test
Ask yourself: "Would I stop scrolling for this?"
- Read it out loud
- Is there curiosity?
- Is there a clear promise?
- Does it sound like everyone else?
Step 3: Show 3 People
Show your hooks to 3 people (without context) and ask: "Which would you click?"
Step 4: Track Performance
Monitor which hook formulas work best for YOUR audience:
- Impressions in first hour
- Click-through rate on "see more"
- Engagement rate (comments + reactions)
Step 5: Double Down
Once you find 2-3 hook formulas that work, use them 80% of the time.
Common Hook Mistakes to Avoid
Mistake 1: Starting with Context
❌ Bad Hook
"I've been thinking a lot lately about productivity, and I wanted to share some thoughts with you all about..."
✅ Good Hook
"Your morning routine is killing your productivity."
Mistake 2: Being Too Vague
❌ Bad Hook
"Here's something interesting I learned recently..."
✅ Good Hook
"I just learned why 90% of cold emails get ignored."
Mistake 3: Burying the Lead
❌ Bad Hook
"I was having coffee with a colleague yesterday, and we got to talking about interviews..."
✅ Good Hook
"I've interviewed 200+ candidates. Here's the #1 mistake I see:"
Mistake 4: Overpromising
Don't promise more than you can deliver. "This ONE trick changed everything!" better deliver something genuinely transformative.
Mistake 5: Copying Others
Using the exact same hook structure as popular creators makes you blend in, not stand out. Adapt, don't copy.
Industry-Specific Hook Examples
For Founders/CEOs
- "I just fired my co-founder. Here's what I learned:"
- "Our startup almost died last month. This saved us:"
- "3 years, 2 pivots, $50K in mistakes. Here's what worked:"
For Marketers
- "This campaign got 0 clicks. Then we changed one word:"
- "I analyzed 500 high-performing ads. Here's the pattern:"
- "Stop doing competitor research. Do this instead:"
For Developers
- "Junior devs: Stop learning frameworks. Learn this:"
- "I spent 6 hours debugging. The fix was 1 line of code."
- "Everyone says 'clean code.' Nobody explains how:"
For Sales Professionals
- "My close rate was 12%. Now it's 67%. Here's what changed:"
- "Stop 'adding value.' Do this instead:"
- "The best salespeople never say these 3 things:"
For Career Coaches/HR
- "Your resume gets 6 seconds of attention. Make them count:"
- "I've reviewed 1,000+ LinkedIn profiles. Here are the red flags:"
- "Everyone says 'network.' Nobody teaches how:"
Advanced Hook Strategies
The Two-Punch Hook
Combine two formulas for extra impact:
- "I got fired last week. [Personal Failure]
Best thing that ever happened to me. [Transformation]" - "Everyone says 'post daily.' [Bold Statement]
I posted once a week and grew faster. [Curiosity Gap]"
The Callback Hook
Reference a previous post to build continuity:
- "Remember that project I mentioned last week? It just failed spectacularly."
- "Update on my LinkedIn experiment: The results are in, and I was wrong."
The Contrast Hook
Set up a sharp contrast in two short lines:
- "Everyone is optimizing for engagement.
I'm optimizing for impact." - "Most people ask 'What can I get?'
Top performers ask 'What can I give?'"
Your Hook Writing Checklist
Before posting, ask yourself:
- ☐ Is it under 2 lines before "see more"?
- ☐ Does it create curiosity or surprise?
- ☐ Does it promise clear value?
- ☐ Would I stop scrolling for this?
- ☐ Is it specific, not vague?
- ☐ Does it stand out from similar content?
- ☐ Can I deliver on the promise?
Practice Makes Perfect
Writing great hooks is a skill that improves with practice. Here's your action plan:
- This week: Write 5 hooks for every post (pick the best one)
- This month: Test all 10 hook formulas at least once
- This quarter: Identify your top 3 performing formulas
- Ongoing: Save hooks that make YOU stop scrolling (swipe file)
🎯 The Hook Success Formula
Great Hook = Curiosity + Promise + Pattern Interrupt
Master this formula, and your LinkedIn game changes completely.
Ready to Write Better Hooks?
Use our LinkedIn Post Formatter to craft and test your hooks before posting. Check out our Post Templates for proven structures that pair perfectly with strong hooks.
Disclaimer: Hook writing advice is based on content analysis and performance data as of 2025. Results may vary by industry, audience, and content quality. Always test and adapt based on your specific audience. This information is provided as-is for educational purposes.